To start off, what is a document design? It is the field concerned with creating texts that integrate words and pictures in ways that help people to achieve their specific goals for using texts as stated by Shriver (1997). Hence, in simple terms, document design is the manipulation of words and images to entice and convey messages to an audience.
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To improve, the title ‘The Textual Shift’ should have been made bigger than the annotation so that the heading gets immediate attention. Although the title is bolded and capitalized, a bigger size would increase the captivity to the title even more.
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Another setback is keywords are not highlighted. As mentioned by Nielsen (1997), in his article, 'How users read on the web", highlighted keywords is a form of scannable text, which functions the same for presentation slides. When audience view the slides, they are just scanning the text to see what the presenter is about to say because their main focus is on the presenter's elaborations. Hence, the highlighted keywords, help the audience to distiguished what is important to focus and remember. As shown in the diagram below, key terms are definitely distinguished but not highlighted through bolding:
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The bolding directs the eyes of the audience to the text and automatically they response by taking the bolded text as something important to deem and probably remember as well.
References:
1. Bernhardt, SA 1986, ‘Seeing the text’, College composition and communication, Vol. 37, No. 1, p.66-78.
2. Kress, G. & van Leeuwen, T. 2006. Reading images. Chapter 1: The semiotic landscape: language and visual communication.
3. Nielsen, J 1997, How users read on the web, viewed 11 September 2009, <http://www.useit.com/alertbox/9710a.html>
4. Reep, DC 2006, ‘Chp 4: Principles of Document Design’, in Technical Writing, 6th ed., Pearson Edu, Inc., New York, p.173-190.
5. Schriver, K.A. 1997, Chapter 6 in Dynamics in document design: creating text for readers, Wiley Computer Pub., New York
